Captive to an Alien Race

June 24th, 2010 by Christopher McCulloh

It had been a law since the Earth was conquered six hundred years ago for children to be forcibly removed from their parents at the age of 11. After your third child was taken, both parents were separated and sent to work in the mines or in the manors serving the Chimra overlords. If you failed to produce children after five years, you were sent at that point. If you refused to “take a mate”, as the Chimra referred to it, by your 25th year, you were sent to the mines then too. Once you had your first child, if you failed to have another within five years, the Chimra “fixed” you.

Once taken, you would never see your child again. Once separated, you would most likely never see your mate again.

Logan refused to allow this to happen.

Ever since Logar had been born 10 and a half years ago, Logan had known he could not. He had held him every chance he got as a baby. He remembered waking up in the middle of the night to find Logar snuggled up against his back at a year and a half old. Or watching him for hours nursing at his mother’s breast as he slowly fell asleep.

Kianna and Logan were in agreement. They had to make it to the Stavinos. The people beyond the sands. The last vestige of rebellion. Legends.

If they got there and the Stavinos were not there, they would become Stavinos. It mattered not if others waited for them. They would not lose their son.

First however, Logan would have to do something about their tracking chips. He lacked the skill to remove them, and it was rumored that if you tried, it would send signals to your brain that killed you. He didn’t doubt it. The tracking chips supressed his and Kianna’s ability to reproduce and if an overlord was so inclined they inflicted great pain.

The chips were implanted somewhere in your body, a random location for everyone to make it more difficult to remove. Through sheer luck theirs were in appendages. He had found that his was implanted in the back of his left hand. Kianna’s was implanted in her second to smallest toe on her right foot. Logar’s, thankfully, was not implanted yet. Until you were taken, you simply wore an array of earings that served the same purpose. Logar would have no trouble cutting off the ear and the toe. The problem was going to be in cutting of his hand.

Skipping Pebbles on the Pond of Space and Time

June 19th, 2010 by Christopher McCulloh

Two years ago I began writing this story. I came back to it recently and decided to finish it and submit it to a Science Fiction magazine in hopes of getting it published. I’ve re-written much of the first two chapters (which were all I’d originally written) and have now added two more chapters. It will probably be seven chapters long in the end. Please feel free to leave critiques and comments. I’d really like to see this published, so the more it’s critiqued the more likely I’ll be able to make it better and hopefully good enough to be picked up. I’ll start with just the first chapter and once I have the whole first draft done will post it here. Here goes…

It was Time for the First Jump.  (Chapter 1)

Seth had lumbered into his space suit and was adjusting his respirator.  No one knew what happened when you went through time, so (despite Seth’s cocky protestations) they made every effort to compensate for any scenario.  Gene thought that it was perfectly plausible that you went into dead space and waited until the desired time came for you to re-enter the timeline, and he wanted to make sure that Seth wouldn’t die of decompression if he was placed in a vacuum to be held for re-entry.  They supplied Seth with enough oxygen for one week (as well as food).  He looked like a goofy turtle with everything he needed being held in this massive shell on his back.  He could barely walk.  He hated the thing, and always seemed a little too willing to try the jump in plain-clothes.

Gene was tempted to let him do it.  After all, it would get rid of him if it didn’t work, which Gene liked to think would make him happy because it would make his life much easier.  But Gene wasn’t about to be responsible for sending someone (even someone he didn’t like) to his death.

They had agreed to send Seth one week into the future.  No real rhyme or reason for the week long increment, it just seemed like a good amount of time.  Long enough to be amazing, but short enough for it to be a bearable wait for Seth if he was aware of the time passing.  Really what it came down to was that a week was how long Seth had insisted when Gene told Seth that he would be sending Seth on his first jump today.  Fine, no need to have another screaming match, and Gene would be happy to be rid of Seth for a full week, plus Gene could not control when or where Seth went when he jumped anyways so even if they did argue about it he knew Seth would just do what he wanted no matter what.

Once they powered up the machine it would be possible for Seth to go to the future and have himself sent back to the moment after he stepped through the gate the first time, making it appear as if he were simply stepping through a door and coming out the other side.  If in the future Gene were so inclined, he could send Seth back to the moment after he had left.  That would mean it would almost appear the whole thing did not work. But then in one weeks time Seth would have to jump over the time he had jumped into the future to keep from killing himself, or so Gene theorized. They had all agreed that complicating the first jump like that would be a bad idea.  Seth would go, and would stay in the future.  One week, a one way trip.

The whole thing was controlled by a satellite, and really the door that the traveler was to walk through was only symbolic and didn’t actually do anything.  The traveler had a microchip implanted in his head just behind his ear, which interfaced with his brain through electrical impulses that humans are constantly leaking and absorbing.  The traveler simply concentrated hard enough on an exact date that the microchip picked up and broadcast to the satellite; which is why Gene had no control over Seth’s jumps.  The satellite would pick up the signal, home in on the traveler and translate forward motion through physical space into forward motion through time to the specified re-entry date.

Walking through the door was the psychological trigger that the traveler needed to initiate the time jump event.  To jump back in time, the traveler (once in the future) simply turned on their heel (while concentrating hard enough) and popped back out the other side of the door.  The satellite was designed to transform your physical structure into information which it would store and then at the appropriate time retranslate that information back into your physical structure while dropping you anywhere in the world you wanted going forward, but only one place (the other side of the marble door frame) when going back.  Kind of a stupid design, but it was a prototype so it was fine.

Travelling backwards was the tricky part since the satellite couldn’t simply “store” your “information” and rebuild you at the specified time. It involved encoding your information onto a single particle and throwing it back through time to a special receiver, which I’ll explain more later, that would then rebuild you the instant it received your signal.

Roger, Gene’s replacement, finished plugging in the final wires and they all held their breath as Gene pressed the big red “power” button.  The whole machine hummed to life.  The new software successfully uploaded to their satellite with the final patches and bug fixes, and a little green light indicated all systems were a go.

Seth sneered at Gene and began lumbering towards the door.  Just before he stepped into the door, he sarcastically called out “beam me up Scotty!” and then stepped through.

It’s an odd thing to describe watching a person, lumbering in a giant turtle-like space suit through a marble door-frame standing all lonely in the center of a dimly lit room, not disappear when you expect them to.  That’s not to say nothing happened.  It was like watching some sort of cheesy computer animated splice job special effect.  As the front of ’space suit Seth’ went in, so the front of ’bruised/scratched/beaten Seth’ came out, until all of Seth collapsed unconscious on the other side of the doorway.

Roger snatched up the phone to call for a medic while Gene scrambled around the console and rushed over to Seth.  Seth had a large bump on the back of his head, most likely a concussion.  He looked like he had been tortured.

Gene and Roger argued about what to do.  If the base was going to be infiltrated some time in the next week, which was the most probable conclusion they were able to come to, they needed to know as soon as possible when that was going to happen.  It could be any minute.  For all they knew they could be dead in twenty minutes and Seth had tried to come back to warn them.  Or either of themselves could be waiting in the future for one of them to jump so they could come back to warn themselves.

In the end they decided that since Roger had gone through basic training and actually served active duty as a spy he was the most qualified to try jumping ahead.  They decided they should both get the chip implanted in their heads just to be safe.

It took only a few painful minutes for them to inject the chip behind each other’s ears and then Roger was walking through the door way.

Since Gene was expecting him to appear coming out of the other side of the doorway it was odd when Roger stepped through and simply dissapeared.

Crap.  The plan had been for Roger to jump nearly a week into the future, figure out what was going on, and come back to precisely the moment after he had jumped.  As the minutes ticked by Gene became more and more anxious.

The medic they had called arrived and began tending to Seth.

“He’s beat up really bad sir” the medic commented.  He looked worriedly at Gene, eyeing him up and down as if to say, ‘did you do this?’.

“Just wake him up” Was all he said in reply.  The medic sighed and shrugged and got out some smelling salts.

Seth came awake with a start.  He looked fearfully at Gene and looked all around the room.  ”I’m…  am I back? Is this…”

“You’re safe now” Gene interrupted him.  The medic wasn’t cleared for any of this and Gene didn’t want anyone to know about any of it if they didn’t absolutely have to.  He ordered the medic into the hallway to wait until he was needed again.  The medic looked confused and unsure, but complied saying that he supposed Seth would be ok for a bit on his own and strongly encouraged Gene not to allow him to sleep before he received further treatment.

Gene and Seth watched as the medic stepped back into the hallway.  As soon as the door closed behind him they began talking at once.

“What happened?”

“When am I?”

“You’re back where you started, we just watched you step through the door in the turtle suit and you came out the other side like this, what happened?”

“You…” Set paused and squinted at Gene.  Then he frowned and looked down, “I don’t remember”.

‘Liar!’ Gene wanted to scream at him.  What was he hiding?

Seth chuckled nervously, “sorry, the last thing I remember is stepping through that door.” He paused again looking around.  ”Where’s Roger?” he asked finally.

“I sent him on ahead to try and find out what was going on.  He was supposed to come back immediately, except he still hasn’t.  He was supposed to arrive a few hours before you did.” Why had he told him? Any number of lies came to mind now, too late.  He did not trust Seth and before his convenient ‘amnesia’ was past he was determined not to reveal anything else.

“Oh.” Was all Seth could muster in reply, still looking at the floor.  Then he vomited.

“Good lord. DOC!” Gene threw the door back open, “looks like he’s worse than I thought…”

The medic scowled at Gene and shook his head as if to say, ‘not worse than I thought’ and rushed back in.  He began re-checking Seth and after a moment told Gene it would be best if they got him to the infirmary for recovery.

Gene took one last look at the marble doorframe as they exited the lab supporting Seth between them. Where the heck was Roger?

Now THAT’S a Lotion for Men

June 16th, 2010 by Christopher McCulloh

So, remember I was complaining about the “Body Cream” that I couldn’t decide if it was lotion or not (It was… I think…)?

Well, I found that someone now makes lotion for men. It even SMELLS like it’s for men (meaning it smells good, but not good like a girl smell good, good like you want to rub that smell on you and smell like that for a girl good).

It’s so much for men that the big bold word “MEN” is actually larger than the product name. It is “MEN body & face LOTION” and it “tackles everyday dryness” and it is “fast absorbing” and “using this is as manly as taming a grizzly while buck naked in the middle of the rockies right after a pack of rabid wolves tuck their tails between their legs and lick your face and ask you to scratch their bellies immediately following you knocking down a tree to make a log cabin with an ax you hewed out of stout oak and iron ore you ripped from the ground with your teeth and chewed into shape all before breakfast when you’ll down an entire pot of coffee so black it puts a full beard on your previously freshly shaven SQUARE CHISELED JAW” (ok so that last part I made up). And to top it all off, it appeals to your desire to get a good deal by saying (almost largest of all) “30% bonus”.

Now THAT’s a LOTION! Bravo Vaseline. Well done.

This Aveeno is actually ok too, very gender agnostic and gets it’s message across very well. Either one of these is acceptable as far as lotion goes.

145.V.17 NE

June 9th, 2010 by Christopher McCulloh

[Mainframe]$ tail accessDoorPanel-Preston.log

====Begin Log

Salutations.

It being Iodine day, I have begun my journal as directed by M.

The nature of my work being what it is, the directive has come that all mental evaluations now include regular loggings of our emotional and physical states. Reports are to be given at regular intervals and I fully intend to honour this directive.

I will begin by stating my name: P[-redacted-]

I am unfamiliar with the habit of such logging and find it difficult. For instance it took me nearly 37 minutes to state the preceeding information. However, M. states that I must do so and so I will. It will be tough to keep in mind not to reveal the sensitive nature of my work as M. and Y. are not aware of its contents and it must be kept classified.

I suppose the point of this is to ferret out any emotional flaws and squelch them and therefor I have come to the decision to put pen to ink (so they say, although I don’t know what it means) that which I most do not want to admit for fear of termination or worse.

That being, I fear I am developing feelings for J.

It began, I believe, well over a year ago (143 New Era) on Tertius 14 (Silicon day incidentally).

I beheld her for the first time entering through the far door. I could not help but watch as she moved, as if in slow motion, down the hall. So elegant. So smoothly. The floor where she had been seemed to gleam with a new beauty as if it were made anew.

She did not acknowledge my presence as she passed on the other side. Part of me was satisfied with this as it follows protocol and my sensitive work would allow for nothing less. However, I felt a pang of sadness that she would not even deign to notice me.

Later, and this I am even more horrified to admit, I merely watched as she entered the hallway again from the other direction this time on my side.

I watched in wonder as she slide along the gleaming floor like some sort of angel. The world a better place for her passing. As she approached me I must say I felt an eager wave of hope mixed with a dash of dread. Would I report her should she attempt to infiltrate my domain? My job to… well, we must not speak of it, suffice to say that what she did next has caused a great deal of mental anguish over dilemma of protocol I must follow. I take great pains to do my job well, and my training does not cover such incidents.

She brushed against me ever so slightly.

Eureka!

Heaven and hell both manifest in such a small gesture. Ecstasy that the sylph beauty would deign to graze against me ever so gently. Horror that she would come so close. Do I take this as an attempt against my work, to gain access to the secrets that I hold? Do I report her? Nay! Let not my word be the cause for such a lithe creature to be terminated, it was but merely an accidental graze!

The next day it happened again. Not an millimeter closer, not a millimeter further away. The lightest of touches. It has happened every day from that one to this. Exactly the same. I have yet to work up the courage to talk to her.

I do not believe this is a breach of protocol, but I spend much of my down time trying to process the scenario. To what end is this happening? What does she expect from me? Is this yet some attempt to gain my confidence and get me to grant access to my work? I do not know. So I sit and I wait.

I believe that is enough for today. I am anxious to learn what M. and Y. think of this.

====END LOG

[Mainframe]$ reformat accessDoorPanel -Preston -remove_experimental_AI
formatting………..
removing_AI…..
DONE.
installing aggressive security program…..
DONE.

[Mainframe]$ repath floorWaxer -Jooont -AI_directive=”avoid door frame”
repathing….
Processing “avoid door frame”………..
Processing complete.

exit

Zeke. Walking.

February 3rd, 2010 by Christopher McCulloh

Just took like 25 steps in a row. Almost walked across the entire living room. 6 or 7 feet at least. :D

Food For Thought: Prodigal Son

February 1st, 2010 by Christopher McCulloh

This has always bothered me. If instead of, or in addition to, going out and telling the son who’s feelings were hurt to go inside and be happy the father had (also) told the prodigal son to go out and speak to his brother, would the two brothers have been reconciled?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I think, yes.

Laugh it Out

January 31st, 2010 by Christopher McCulloh

Why I will never ever ever do cry it out.

Tonight something magical happened, but before I get to it, a little history. Almost every night (sometimes multiple times a night) for the past 11 months I have put my son to sleep by rocking/bouncing/holding him.

My strategy for getting him to go to sleep is pretty much this:

  • Turn on the spinny musical projector thing (not that he likes it, he used to, but now it’s more just a signal that it’s sleepy time. He actually gets upset when I turn it on, because he knows what it means and he doesn’t want to go to sleep)
  • Hold him (I always start with him facing me with his head on my chest, sometimes he will fall asleep that way immediately, usually he will just squirm into some other random position and get comfy. This can include facing away from me. I try to be very cooperative and guess what he wants. The quicker he gets comfy, the quicker he goes to sleep)
  • Move (usually I do half-squats semi-rapidly in time with the music. By the end my legs are BURNING. Usually about the time I can take no more he is asleep and I can switch to a sway/gentle-bounce combo)

This whole process takes about 5 minutes. Once he is out, I let “rock-a-bye baby” play three times through and I’m done. I take him to the living room and give him to his mommy to sleep while I get ready for bed, or I go sit in my recliner and rock while I read a book and relax (this used to be a very important step. If I didn’t do this for at least 30 minutes, as soon as I tried to lay him down on the bed he would wake up screaming).

Yes, this sounds insanely easy and almost pleasant. It didn’t always work out so well. I perused numerous “sleep” books (several of which are on my bookshelf) looking for “a better way”. What was I looking for? Well, if I think about it logically, I was looking for an “out”. I was looking for something that would make me feel ok about leaving my child to scream himself to sleep. I knew that the best way for my child to go to sleep was in my arms. What I also knew was that I was tired and bored. I spent a lot of time thinking about the fact that I could be doing “something else” and that I was tired and would too like to go to sleep. I was very frustrated and sometimes angry. Sometimes enough so that I would have to hand him to Julie while I went and calmed down.

I wanted to just be able to take him to his room, lay him in his crib and have him magically close his eyes and go to sleep for the night. Then I could go to my room and do whatever I wanted. Basically, when it comes down to it, I didn’t want to have a baby.

I mean, sure, I “wanted a baby”, right? I mean, “having a baby” is fun, right? Babies are cute and do cute things and make you smile. Except when it’s two in the morning and they are screaming for no discernible reason and you want to be asleep but instead you’re bouncing him and going “shhhh shhh shhhhh” and feel like crying yourself. That’s when you find out what you’re made of.

Just like I’d love to walk out back and pick money off of my money tree, and slice a piece of fat free, calorie free, guilt-free bacon off of my talking-flying pig, I wanted to just walk the baby into the nursery with no real prep-time whatsoever, plop him down on his mattress and watch his little eyes magically slide shut with ner but a lullaby.

Sorry Charlie, doesn’t work that way.

Once I realized that I was starting to resent Zeke for “impeding on my freedom/time/happiness/whatever” I really started thinking things over. Why was I getting mad at him? Is this really his fault? Why is he crying? Why can’t he sleep? Can he do anything wrong? What am I doing wrong?

What I realized is that I was “fighting it”. I hadn’t truly embraced being a father. Sad but true. You’d think that with God giving me NINE MONTHS to prepare, I’d have really committed to it. You’d think that 5 months into actually having him in the world I’d be caught hook-line-and-sinker. Nope, I was still balking. When’s he going to go to sleep on his own? Why do I have to do this? Why can’t he just sleep and stay asleep? Wah wah wah. I need I need I need, I want I want I want. Who’s the baby here anyways???

He is a little human being that I created. God gave him to me to raise. He is my most important priority and job and responsibility in the whole world. He is God’s and does not belong to me. Would I give him to someone else? No. Why? Because I love him. And yet God loves him a gagillion times more than I do and HE gave him to me. I’d better not screw this up. Of all the bad things I could do, that would be the absolute worst. It’s time to encase my feet in concrete and throw myself into the deep-end of this ocean called “Fatherhood”.

Suddenly all the anger, resentment, and whiny-ness melted away. I realized there was NOTHING more important I could be doing than rocking my son to sleep at night. No matter how much time it took. No matter how much sleep I lost. No matter how tired I was. That was my job. So I did it, and I became happy. I learned some tricks too. I got GOOD at it.

What I discovered was this:

  1. Babies need a schedule (step 1. Read a book, step 2. take a bath, step 3. go to bed).
  2. This schedule in no way revolves around the made up construct we call “a clock”. It’s possible that at 9pm sharp, little Timmy will get tired and be easily put to bed each night for a month, but that’s just sheer crazy dumb luck. Depending on naps, level of activity, feedings, visitors, trips, etc. it’s more likely that sometime between 7pm and 1am little Timmy will finally be primed for sleeping. What matters is the order in which you do things leading up to (signalling) impending long-term night-time sleep. Maybe ~around~ 9pm you can get him to sleep, but he’s not an alarm clock that can really be “set”.
  3. Everything will change. He used to like his projector; now, not so much. He used to like laying cradled in my arms while I patted his back, now he screams if I put him that way, except for tonight when he didn’t… Roll with the punches.
  4. It won’t last forever. Enjoy it while you can. Every now and then something amazing will happen

Which brings me to tonight. Two amazing things happened tonight.

First I put him facing me with his head on my chest as usual. He starts fussing (he was really really tired. I waited too long to start trying to put him to sleep) and ends up With his head thrown back and his hands up in the air (he’s trying to escape). I counter attack by doing some squats while turning my entire body (up-left/down-middle/up-right). This immediately begins to soothe him but he stays in that position with my hand behind his head to hold it up. He then starts blowing raspberries at me while he is falling asleep. The sleepier he gets the funnier sounding they get until I’m choking back outright laughter trying not to wake him up. From the other room it sounds like sobs and my wife comes rushing in to see what’s wrong (which of course wakes him up). Mister Buddy: 1, Daddy: 0.

Next he settled with his feet in my left hand, and his head nuzzled into my shoulder with his face turned up towards me. I thought he was asleep. I leaned down and gave him a little kiss on his cheek. He smiled a big toothy grin. It was adorable. I kissed him again. This time he giggled. I kissed him again, now he laughed. His eyes still shut he reaches up and places his little hand on my chin/cheek as if to say, “Daddy, you’re so silly. I love you.” before he fell asleep completely.

Those two little things made me think back down the path that led me here. All the hard work and wondering if I was doing the right thing, and being the only one I know not letting my baby scream himself to sleep. Now here I am with a wonderful bonding experience with my son, him laughing himself to sleep (in under 10 minutes almost every night). I wouldn’t trade it for any other way. It’s harder, but most of the right things in life are.

One last note on cry-it-out (and co-sleeping/breast-feeding in general actually). My new argument against cry-it-out is “look at what a wonderful bonding opportunity you are missing”. One of my old arguments (which I still think is true) against it is, 10,000 years ago, when my great-great-etc-grandpa was living in a cave/ditch/hut/tree/whatever with wild predators lurking about. Would he EVER have just put his son/daughter down on the ground to scream themselves to sleep? NO WAY. The baby would have gotten eaten or something. That dude CLUNG to his baby through the whole night to make sure nothing bad happened. That’s how we were made. Babies were meant to sleep in their parents arms, or at least directly next to their parents. If not, breasts would be detachable, and kids would come with ninja-skills and wolverine claws. Seriously, rocking to sleep and co-sleeping are the absolute most-natural way there is. They just make sense.

Screen printing a Chris Merritt t-shirt

August 18th, 2009 by Christopher McCulloh

What is wrong with math education.

June 25th, 2009 by Christopher McCulloh

The politicians say, “we need higher standards.” The schools say, “we need more money and equipment.” Educators say one thing, and teachers say another. They are all wrong. The only people who understand what is going on are the ones most often blamed and least often heard: the students. They say, “math class is stupid and boring,” and they are right.

Brilliantly written and very interesting. On page 4, when the guy puts a line through the triangle in the box, and then finds out what implications this has for his question… I have to admit, I almost got a tear in my eye. It blew my mind. Then, on page 5, my heart just sank. It was like someone fed me my favorite ice cream (just think about it, maybe with cookie chunks. Maybe with sprinkles. Creamy. Delicious. Maybe some hot fudge drizzled on too) and then told me that they were feeding all of the children in the world frozen card-board drizzled with motor oil so they would “get the idea” of what ice-cream is like. Just read it and see for yourself… seriously…

What it’s like…

May 5th, 2009 by Christopher McCulloh

They had been running all day. Sweat dotted his brow. His breath coming in ragged gasps. She was practically dead on her feet. Her eyes long since closed in concentration at the effort of placing one foot in front of the other. There was no going back. She carried in her hand the seed they had taken from the valley of light.

In the crisp cool morning air the guardian mother had entrusted it to her. Floating as a spot of light, swirling downy feathers circling around the pulsating dot as she spoke. Not privy to what she had said to her, he knew at least that it was of utmost importance that they make it through before the last rays of light from sun left the peak of the mountain in shadow. She had told him the guardian mother had said that they must be out of the valley before the onset of night, or they would lose the seed.

He had watched entranced as the glowing orb had flashed green before emerged from it a gem so pure he thought he might weep at the sight. An emerald of the same green glow that had shone the light of the orb. It still held softly to this glow as it sat curled lovingly in her fingers. It seemed to glean its glimmer from the sun, always matching perfectly the radiance currently illuminating the ever-darkening forest they charged through with reckless abandon. He knew with utter certainty that if they didn’t reach the foot of the mountain soon, that radiance would be gone forever; the stone crumbling to dust in her hands. He couldn’t let it happen. He would give his life to ensure it’s safe passage. That is, of course, why she had chosen him.

Their feet were bleeding. Panic was beginning to rise in his chest. He glanced back at her tear-strewn face. Her eyes still tightly closed as she clutched the stone to her breast. She trusted him. Maybe she shouldn’t have. He had gotten them lost. Then the deartch-den-whites had found them. She was no help in the fight. How could she be? He knew the pain it caused her to grip the stone. How it burned her flesh. Such was the price they paid. Such was the price that all paid to bring a new soul into the land of the living.

The guardian mother had bid him to fill his water skin from her well. They had spent the morning walking happily through the valley dripping the cool water over her fingers to keep the stone from heating to the point of pain. Their happiness had quickly turned to staggering fear as they realized they had lost the path in a broad field in the vast valley. They had gotten confused and begun following a dear path instead. That was when the beasts had begun to chase them.

His sword now covered in dried blood, as well as his left arm. Two of his fingers there were broken and he had a nasty gash from where one of the beasts’ claws had torn his flesh while ripping asunder his shield as if it were kindling before he had lopped it’s nasty head off. It wasn’t supposed to be this way. It was supposed to be quick and relatively easy. But as sometimes happened, they had become lost. They should have been out of the valley hours ago, before mid-day even. Now they were being pursued hotly by an enemy intent on not only eating their flesh, but on burying the seed in the valley floor, where instead of metamorphasizing into a youngling, it would twist into a gnarled beast. Then it too would become intent only on preying upon others trying to make the sacred journey. Better to let the light extinguish in her hand than allow that.

He knew, however, that if the sacred glow did dwindle to nothing clutched that way in her fist, it might well take her with it. The despair at having failed the sacred stone entrusted to her, could well break her heart; literally causing it to fail. He’d always feared such a thing might happen. No one liked to talk of such things, but it was a warning solemnly spoken of when such matters were brought up and advice was being given.

He could almost see the light moving up the mountain towards the peak. The sun having disappeared from his view some time ago. It’s lustrous rays moving steadily towards the peak; towards the mark of the dimly glowing seed’s doom. Already the line of light was reaching the tree line where disappeared the towering evergreens that climbed the mountain to where the air was too thin to any longer sustain them. The orange glow made the shrubs that dotted the mountain glow as if on fire. The fiery colors a warning beacon to him, urging him to quicken his pace, to hurry.

She cried out in pain. They heard her. They were coming. He could hear their lusty growls for his flesh. Their slobbery teeth chattering as they salivated to gnaw on his bones. Then he saw it. The marble stone archway. Glimmering in the dusk light, lit mostly by the torches ensconced on either side. Beckoning him with a warm glow, delicately framing the well of life, lit and waiting for their safe return and the conclusion the journey. It was their goal, and the safe harbor for their precious stone.

He set his teeth in resolve and with what strength he had left gripped her hand. They were almost there. If they could just reach the gate before the deartch-den-whites got them. The guardians there waved to them, beckoning them onward. Still too far away to clearly see that he was wounded and desperately fleeing for his life.

She cried out again, this time stumbling and going down. The gaping maw of a deartch-den-white filled his vision as it leapt from the brush at the side of the path behind them. It’s fangs on a collision course with the exposed flesh at the back of her neck.

Not on his watch.

He let go of her hand for a better grip on his hilt and stepped into the swing. His whole body committing to the motion of his attack. Blade level with his shoulders, sword cocked sideways as he twisted and dedicated all of his will and strength to the cleaving blow.

Contact.

It sliced cleanly with nearly silent deadly accuracy. Catching the beast square at the hinge of it’s jaw and happily separating the top of it’s head from the hideous body below before sailing free from it’s quarry into the quickly cooling valley air with a swiftness that almost didn’t give time for a trail of blood to follow it’s beautiful deadly arc as it rounded from it’s masters right side to his left.

He marveled at the delicate beauty of what he had done with his sword, nearly without thinking, for a fraction of a second before the world again exploded with the menace of new threat. Death was almost upon him.

“Go!” He screamed, as the whole of the valley floor cried out with a deadly wail of the triumphant cry of the beasts that had now, finally, found them again. She, gasping sobs back, stumbled to her feet, fleeing down the path. Those waiting guardians had gone from happy calls of beckoning to terrified urgent cries for them to flee.

She would make it. He thought he would not. He stood to fight. Happy in the knowledge that she would be safe. He, committed now, and acceptant of the fact he would die, set about the grim task of reaping down her foe with a certain solemn satisfaction of the work set before him. His mind finally, and for the first time, cleared of all fear. Time slowed down as he saw to the killing with almost lazy certain strokes. He thought he would fail in the end of course, but with a quite confidence also he knew she would reach the gates.

Time to stand. Time to fight.

He could feel them coming. The bushes again exploded into a tangle of leaves, claws, fangs and death. He didn’t even give the monster time to clear the brush before running it straight through with his blade. It yelped in surprise before falling flailing on the ground as another came charging directly behind it. He flicked his blade from the side, catching it in the arm-pit and pivoting around letting it’s momentum carry it into another of his quarry coming flying down the path for him. They collided into a furry bloody mass as he lunged forward running the first the rest of the way through sliding the sword cleanly between the second’s ribs. This is the fight he had been preparing for his entire life.

She cried out. He looked back, newly stricken with terror. There between him and her, tearing with mad abandon toward her back, was one of the fell beasts. He shot like an arrow towards it. Urged on by her frantic screams. There was no way he was going to get there in time. The creature leapt through the air landing heavily on her back, knocking the cries from her lungs with a heavy thud as she tumbled to the ground.

His vision went red. Rage filled his mind. She would not die this day. Not while he yet breathed.

His legs churned. His lungs screamed. His arms ached. He watched in horror as the beast crouched on her back. It’s claw coming up in the air, pausing (it seemed for an eternity), then plunging down to rip flesh from her back. She gasped and coughed. The wind still knocked from her lungs preventing her from crying out. The beast tipped its head back in triumphant laughter as it brought its now bloody claws up for another torturing swipe. It was toying with her. That was it’s last mistake.

He slammed into the nightmarish creature with all of his might. They sailed off the path and into a tree. The beast bearing the brunt of the impact. His sword went flying. In his rage it only took three swift motions to render the creature unconscious and beyond recovery. It would not rise again.

He turned to see her bleeding and stumbling towards safety. He glanced toward the mountain. To his horror he saw the shadow now beginning to swallow the bottom of the snow line. They had very little time, and very little chance.

He grabbed her behind her shoulders, sweeping his arm and his ruined hand beneath her knees, gathering her in his arms. He staggered under her weight. She was light, but he was dead tired. He could still hear them coming. The rest of them were charging through the woods toward them. Placing one foot in front of the other with all the strength and swiftness he could muster, he trudged towards the arch with a pace that surprised him. Fear, adrenaline, and resolve adding strength and swiftness to his exhausted legs. If the nightmarish monsters caught him now, they were both dead.

They were almost there. They still had time. They could still make it through the gate and plant the seed in the sacred well. Arrows sailed past him, thunking into their quarries with deadly accuracy. Bringing them down smoothly and surely. They would make it. He and her both. He couldn’t believe his fortune.

They stepped through the archway and the gate came slamming closed behind them as the watchmen grasped his and her arms helping them on toward the well were she would plant the seed. They had but moments before the icy peak above plunged into darkness.

Her eyes opened as she stood at the brink of the ring of stones surrounding the mystical soil waiting to accept the stone from her tender hands. He looked at her expectantly and she stared at the flames below. Flames! He reached for the water the guardian mother had given him from her well. He was to throw the icy water on the flames to give her the moment she needed to plunge the seed into the soil without being burnt.

The water was gone. Sometime in the fight he had lost it. His moth dropped open. Anguish gripped his heart.

He could tell by the set of her jaw, the resolve in her eye, that she was determined. She drew a deep breath into her lungs before dropping swiftly to her knees punching the ground in the center of the ring as she came down. That breath that had so quietly and calmly gone in, came out in a blood-curdling scream as her fist sank into the burning soil mixed with coals. The flames licked and danced up her arm to her elbow, crisping the fringes of her sleeve. Her scream chilled his blood and seemed to freeze the moment in eternity. He realized he had fallen to the ground with her as she came down and was now looking up at her crouched figure framed against the peak as the last light of the day glimmered from the icy mountain tip, and then was gone. She quickly withdrew her hand and collapsed beside him.

Had they made it?

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